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David Falkayn

Shakedown Cruise

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If you'd like to discuss or leave feedback for the first tale of the USS Sutherland, this is the place for it.  This story has gone through one revision since it first came out and I'll probably go back at some point and tighten up some of the continuity errors that always happens with lead stories and bring it more within the United Trek universe.

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Afternoon David,

I read the first Suthy adventure and found it simply and excellent story of showing how a crew must be ready for any conditions be it diplomatic conferences, nebula surveys, or hostile attacks by those who simply do not like the Federation. Those being the Cardassians, Romulans, or other races that wish to claim the surrounding outlying systems that simply can not always be protected by Starfleet. I'm going on the read the rest of the stories and give you an honest opinion on them. ;D So keep up the good and wonderful story telling! :)

BSG-Phoenix 

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Thanks!  I really do appreciate your comments as well as the support from my fellow UT writers--they really are helping me in my efforts to push off these bouts of depression I've been dealing which, combined with work and real life obligations, have really put a damper on my writing.  Hopefully, with Spring Break here, I can get back into the saddle and get some words on electronic paper!

Thanks again!

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